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Interactive comment on “ On the role of climate modes in modulating the air-sea CO 2 fluxes in Eastern Boundary Upwelling Systems ” by Riley X
| Content Provider | Semantic Scholar |
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| Author | Brady, Riley X. |
| Copyright Year | 2018 |
| Abstract | would be better to lead off with a summation of the main points, and then further discussion of each, broken into a larger number of shorter paragraphs each focused on a specific topic. The Introduction meanders about a number of related topics in a way that could easily give the reader the impression that high-resolution regional hindcast simulations were employed (3/15-20). There is nothing wrong with mentioning the utility of such tools, but ideally one should try to structure the Introduction in a way that focuses on (1) what is the problem at hand? (2) what tools were used to address it? and (3) what is novel in the analysis that sets it apart from what is already in the literature? Similarly, I don’t think that the idea that previous EBC studies have not focused on CO2 (2/18, 3/8) is either accurate or relevant (and the sentence on 2/18-20 is simply ugly). Statements like 7/27-29 are also unnecessary; this section is properly part of the Results, and statements like this belong in the Discussion (see also 6/11-13, 7/10-11). |
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